[English Diary Club] Last Matsuri and CA

원문:

I’ve been to Japanese Matsuri place. And I think it could be the last matsuri for me. Because, from now on, I only have four days, and I think I will not come back to Japan. If I decide to visit Japan again, then It would be Sapporo. But I would like to go to the U.S for doing Master program. Now, I’m preparing that. Living in CA is one of my dream, so I will do my best to go CA. God helps this young boy please. 

 

Correction:

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"I recently attended a Japanese Matsuri event, and I believe it could be my last matsuri experience for now. I only have four days remaining, and I don't anticipate returning to Japan. However, if I do decide to visit again in the future, Sapporo would be my destination. Currently, I'm preparing to pursue a Master's program in the United States. It has always been my dream to live in California, so I will put in my best effort to make that happen. I hope that God will assist this young boy on his journey."

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