[English] Explanation Practice: Quantum computing

[Orginal Paragraph]

Quantum computing is a type of computation that uses quantum bits, or 'qubits', instead of the binary 'bits' used in traditional computing. While classical bits can be either 0 or 1, qubits can be both at the same time thanks to a principle called superposition. Another key principle is entanglement, which allows qubits that are entangled to be linked together such that the state of one can directly influence the other no matter how far apart they are. These properties give quantum computers potential to process vast amounts of data and solve complex problems much faster than classical computers.

 

[My 1 minute explanation]

Quantum computing is really different from traditional computer. It could be solve complex problems even faster than traditional ones. Because they use several traits, like quantum physics. Classic computers use only 1 bit, 0 or 1. Quantum computers can use there two things at the same time. Quantum computers has another trait, called entanglement. Even if the distance is really far between data, it doesn't matter to process it. So it could be also helpful to solve complicated problems.

 

[Correction]

Quantum computing is quite different from traditional computing and has the potential to solve complex problems much faster. This is due to its use of principles from quantum physics. Unlike classical computers which use bits that can be either 0 or 1, quantum computers use 'qubits'. These qubits can represent both 0 and 1 at the same time. Quantum computers have another feature known as entanglement. This means that the state of one piece of data can influence another, regardless of how far apart they are. This property also contributes to the ability of quantum computers to solve complex problems.