A clear sky

원문:

맑은 하늘은 우리에게 아름다움과 평화를 선사하는 자연의 선물입니다. 푸르고 맑은 상태에서 우리를 맞이하는 하늘은 끝없이 넓은 공간을 펼쳐주며, 그 아래로는 햇빛이 빛나고 구름이 흐르는 풍경이 펼쳐집니다. 이렇게 맑은 하늘은 우리에게 자유와 활력을 불어넣어주는데, 그 안에서 우리는 안정과 평화를 느낄 수 있습니다. 더불어 마음을 가라앉히고 마음의 안정을 찾을 수 있는 공간으로 우리를 인도합니다. 그 안에서 우리는 푸른 색상과 햇빛의 활기로 마음을 달래고, 새로운 에너지와 희망을 얻을 수 있습니다. 이는 우리에게 자유와 활동의 기회를 제공하며, 우리가 원하는 대로 행동하고 꿈을 펼칠 수 있는 환경을 만들어줍니다. 뿐만 아니라, 맑은 하늘은 우리와 자연의 연결고리이기도 합니다. 하늘의 아름다움은 우리에게 자연을 사랑하고 존중하는 마음을 불러일으킵니다. 우리는 하늘을 통해 우리가 속한 자연의 아름다움과 그 가치를 느낄 수 있으며, 이는 우리에게 자연을 높이 평가하고 지키는 책임을 부여합니다. 때로는 우리에게 에너지와 활력을 주는 충전소가 되기도 합니다. 햇빛이 비추는 맑은 하늘 아래에서 우리는 새로운 에너지를 얻고, 우리의 몸과 마음을 활기차게 유지할 수 있습니다. 우리에게 새로운 시작과 환기를 줌으로써, 우리의 삶에 더 많은 활력을 부여합니다.

 

영어로:

Clear sky, it's a mother nature's present that give a chance to feel the beauty of nature and peace. It provides immeasurable space and greets us with pure and brilliant state, we can feel stability and peace from warm hug of blue sky. Furthermore, it draw us into the place that can relieve the stress and find peaceful mind. With the brillant blue color and bright sunshine, we can soothe our mind and have new energy and hope. It provides us to freedom and chance to activate, creating an environment where we can act as we want and fulfill our dreams. Additionally, clear sky connects us with nature. Beauty of the sky inspires us to love the mother nature and show respect to them. We can acknowledge great value of it and dignity through the sky, this kind of behavior give us the responsibility to appreciate and protect nature. Sometimes, They promote us by giving energy and vitality. Under the sky with bright sunshine, We can get new energy, also maintein our body and mind healthy. By giving us new beginnings and ventilation, it gives more vitality to our lives.

 

GPT Correction:

A clear sky is Mother Nature's gift, offering us an opportunity to immerse ourselves in the beauty and tranquility of the natural world. It presents a vast expanse of unbounded space, embracing us with its pristine and radiant state, evoking a sense of stability and serenity. The warm embrace of the blue sky has a calming effect, relieving stress and allowing our minds to find peace. With its brilliant hues and abundant sunshine, it rejuvenates our spirits and instills in us a renewed energy and hope. The clear sky provides us with freedom and the chance to activate our potential, creating an environment where we can pursue our dreams and aspirations. Furthermore, it serves as a bridge connecting us to nature. The sky's beauty inspires a deep love and reverence for the natural world, prompting us to appreciate and protect its invaluable resources. Through the sky, we gain a heightened awareness of nature's grandeur and our responsibility to safeguard it. At times, the clear sky also serves as a source of motivation, infusing us with energy and vitality. Bathed in the radiant sunlight, we find renewed vigor and strive to maintain our physical and mental well-being. Offering new beginnings and a breath of fresh air, the clear sky adds vitality to our lives, reminding us of the endless possibilities that await us.

 

Self-feedback:

이러한 약간 문학적인 글을 쓰는 것에 익숙하지 않다. 그래서 그런지 짚티가 그냥 거의 글을 새로 써줬다.

 

peace -> tranquility

immeasurable space -> vast expanse of unbounded space

pure and brilliant state -> pristine and radiant state

peace -> serenity

hug -> embrace 

the brillant blue color -> its brilliant hues

can soothe our mind -> rejuvenates (이건 좀 대단한듯)

clear sky connects us with nature -> it serves as a bridge connecting us to nature

respect -> reverence

great value of it and dignity -> a heightened awareness of nature's grandeur

Sometimes -> At times

Under the sky with bright sunshine -> Bathed in the radiant sunlight (전혀 상상하지도 못했던 문학적 표현)

 

다양한 표현을 배울 수 있는 것 같아서 아주 재미있는 것 같다.

조금 더 다양한 표현, 문법을 구사하고 싶다. 아직은.. 초등학생? 잘 쳐주면 중학생 수준이지 않을까